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作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；文章用词太过单一，注意少数拼写错误。
In conclusion,both sides are reasonable,nonetheless they are one-sided.In my opinion,hosting the Olympics at a permanent home has plenty of advantages and disadvantages.In my opinion,the host Olympicss beyond all discussion ,but we should make it clear that let the every country has the rights of hosting the olympics.In conclusion,both sides are reasonable，nonetheless they are one-sided.In my opinion,hosting the Olympics at a permanent home has plenty of advantages and disadvantages.In my opinion,the host Olympicss beyond all discusion ,but we should make sure that let the every country has the rights of hosting the olympics
