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Recent decades have witnessed an apparent tendency that the Olympic games have been played every 4 years in many countries around the world.some people believed this is the best way to bring financial and non financial .but we should be encouraged among different countries .it is an important part of people ,s culture life and tourist sightseeing.however,there has been a heated debate as to whether the Olympics should not have a permanent home for the following reasons.