新东方托福高分作文:你更想在大公司还是小公司工作?

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。

some people like to work in a large company,but somebody prefer to stay at small company, these depends on the different personality and job category.People who choose to work for a large company may have a more aggressive character. The large company usually have more opportunity and pressure as well, if somebody want to have a promotion , he or she had better work in the large company. On the other hand, small companies have their advantage.Employees in small company may have fewer perssure ,and it's more easy to get along with the colleagues. Also small company might become a large compeny in the future,such the facebook, which only has few people in it ,but gradually it becomes a huge company and won a big succusse. In my opinion , I prefer to work in a small company .Because small company have less employees and everyone in the office is very familiar with each other. We can work together just like a family! Moreover, I believe that small company have more potential to grow ,and I can be the founding member to see and join it's grows.