采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用。
Recent decades have witnessed an apparent tendency that the Olympics have been played every 4 years in many countries around the world.some people believed this is the best way to bring financial and non financial so that we should be encouraged among different countries.It is an important part of people's culture life and tourist sightseeing.However,there has been a heated debate as to whether the Olympics should not have a permanent home for the following reasons.