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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17595
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文章词汇表达丰富,不过请增加高级词汇的使用;从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误。

用户练习作文:

snap judgement can never be trusted. As a normal person ,we usually judge things that is good or bad according it's appearance. people usually like things which have beautiful appearance and colors, things or persons with beautiful appearance always give us a good impression. when we as a child, we received education from medias , broadcasts, movies and school education always tell us that good things have beautiful appearance and bad things have ugly surface .we was unconsciously influenced and form a habit that always think beauty is good thing and ugliness thing is bad. but this judgement is not always right. If we watch the program "Animal World" on TV, we will know that some beautiful flowers or animals are very dangerous for human. some experienced zoologists know that snakes with bright-colored means poisonous and dangerous for human safety. As well known, puppy is a plant can bloom beautiful flower; but puppy is raw material to produce drugs and herion which cause hundreds and thousands died from taking drugs. Above all tell us that snap judgement a thing just from appearance or first impression is not a good thing. exactly as a proverbs in China, "a distant journey tests the strength of a horse and a long task proves the character of a man, time tries all". if you want to clearly know a thing, you must spend time on it; then you will have a clear judgement for a thing. and anything in the world just judge with good or bad is fault, everything in the world have the reason for existence; from the famous physicist Einstein principals of "the theory of relatively" , we can know that there aren't absolutely good or bad in the world. so we should consider things with science and practice.

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