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we are ready to spring outing with my classmates.spring is the best time to climb the mountain.if the weather is good ,neither too cold or too hot.li ming and his classmates by bike to get there .on the way ,liming make the wrong turn and happened in accident and hurt his right leg.obey the traffic rules is very important .we should obey the traffic rules at ordinary.attention the trafffic .stop at the red light,green is go.don,t riding too fast,keep to the right.wear a helent when ride a bike .don,t break traffic regulations or u will be fine .
