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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36945
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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文中从句数量过少;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写。

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My best firend. I have a beautiful girl friend. She English name is linda,and she has a Chinese name is linruimei. She is from a beautiful country ,Australia,and this year she is 14 years old.It is very young. She studys in the No.2 Middle School, grade 2, class 9. And study very well. She is good at English, Chinese and computer. And she loves singing playing basketball and reading some books. She is kind and friendly.And,She is cute and very beautiful. we are always stay and eat together.She is my beast friend. She has long,straight,black hair,big,black eyes and a small nose. She is very thin and kind,she is cute,too. Her English and Chinese is very good. She is hard-working. Her favorite season is summer,because it’s hot,she can eat ice- cream.

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