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My best firend. I have a beautiful girl friend. She English name is linda,and she has a Chinese name is linruimei. She is from a beautiful country ,Australia,and this year she is 14 years old.It is very young. She studys in the No.2 Middle School, grade 2, class 9. And study very well. She is good at English, Chinese and computer. And she loves singing playing basketball and reading some books. She is kind and friendly.And,She is cute and very beautiful. we are always stay and eat together.She is my beast friend. She has long,straight,black hair,big,black eyes and a small nose. She is very thin and kind,she is cute,too. Her English and Chinese is very good. She is hard-working. Her favorite season is summer,because it’s hot,she can eat ice- cream.