小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

She has long，straight，black hair，big，black eyes and a small nose. She is very thin and kind，she is cute，too. Her English and Chinese is very good. She is hard-working. Her favorite season is summer，because it’s hot，she can eat ice- cream. She likes playing the piano，reading books and singing songs.Who’s she？She is my best friend ——Wang Qi. She has a very good English name，too——Angle.