2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；能够运用简单的从句，但不熟练；作者词汇表达不够丰富，另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写。

Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdon,it is a beautiful city.many foreign come here for sightseeing,when my roreign friend is going to visit my hometown.I will take her visit the Guangzhou , Guangzhou has a Yuexiu Park. it is a largest park in Guangzhou with many recreational and sports ficilitice.such as swwing pool, arts gellery ,children's playgroud and so on .