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Last year I went on a trip to Beijing. I arrived in Beijing at ten in the morning on September thirtieth, I went to Tian’anmen Square on October first. After lunch, I visited the Palace Museum. The next day we went to the Great Wall. It was great!I like it very much. I had a good trip in Beijing.