2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦137:北京旅行

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I went on a trip to Beijing last year .The air is fresh there.It's sunny on that day,but the weather in Beijing was very cool. I arrived in Beijing at ten in the morning on the September thirtieth. Beijing was a beautiful place . I went to Tian’anmen Square on the October first.It was a big place. After lunch, I visited the GuGongHistory museum. We visited the Great Wall .It was big and beautiful .next day . It was great！I like it very much. Beijing is a good place to visit.