健康对我们来说非常重要, 我们有很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示,以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题,写一篇80个词左右的短文,倡议“健康生活”,从三个方面说明如何保持健康。
短文首句已给出,不记入总词数, 可适当发挥。
作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Good Ways to Keep Healthy It is very important for us to keep healthy.But do you know the ways to keep our healthy? First,we need to have healthy habits,we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat.Different kinds of foods are necessary,it’s also important to have a balanced diet. We can exercise,it help us to keep fit.We can take a walk after dinner,we can walk to school instead of taking a bus,after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends. We should try to do more exercises every day. Happiness is another way to keep healthy.When we are lonely or unhappy,try to make friends,it is a good way to keep us happy.If you smile often,you also feel happy.So,be happy to be healthy.
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