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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71660
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, the Dragon Park is the very place that i want to show him. There are many reasons why I want to show him the park, and i only want to state only a few of them. First, there are a great number of dragon fossils there, and most of them are formed millions of years ago. They have got great value and the experts and scientists can know more about the dragons from the fossils. this is the most important reason why i want to take my friend there.

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