高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；文章层次较为清晰。

I used to live in a beautiful small town with green trees all around it．The river，running through the town，had clean water in which fish could be seen swimming in groups. The house, however, were small and simple, and the street wasn't wide enough to run cars. People here worked hard all year round yet living a life of no more than povertily. Now great changes had taken place here. You can see tall buildings, department stores and factories everywhere. Cars and buses are running in broad streets. But with the development of industry, pollution is becoming more and more serious. A lot of trees are gone, and fish have disappeared because of the dirty water. To our joy, people have been doing their best to stop pollution and make the town even more beautiful.