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4. 突然，一只巨大的蚂蚁向她飞快跑去，她很害怕，大声呼救但没人回答。最后她醒过来，原来只是一个梦。
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dear Martin, Last week I read two articles from the book “Alice in Wonderland” in the English class and they were quite interesting. Last night, I saw Alice standing beside my bed. She invited me to Wonderland. When we got to Wonderland, flowers sang and danced like people/were singing and dancing like people. They smiled and said hello to her. Monkeys, goldfish and camels flew around like birds in the sky. I tried/did my best to fly but still failed. Suddenly, a big ant ran quickly to me. I felt very afraid. I shouted help,but nobody replied.Then I ran into a beautiful garden.What a nice garden......In the end I woke up and found it was just a dream. Everyone has a beautiful dream,but everything depends on if!If you want to these things come true,please learn more things. Right? All the best Mary
