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4. 突然，一只巨大的蚂蚁向她飞快跑去，她很害怕，大声呼救但没人回答。最后她醒过来，原来只是一个梦。
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dear Martin, Last week I read two articles from the book “Alice in Wonderland” in the English class and they were quite interesting. Last night, I saw Alice standing beside my bed. She invited me to Wonderland. When we got to Wonderland, flowers sang and danced like people. They smiled and said hello to her. Monkeys, goldfish and camels flew around like birds in the sky. I tried my best to fly but still failed. Suddenly, a big ant ran quickly to me. I felt very afraid. I shouted help,but nobody replied.Then I ran into a beautiful garden.What a nice garden......In the end I woke up and found it was just a dream. Everyone has a beautiful dream,but everything depends on if!If you want these things come true,please learn more things. Right? All the best Mary
