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Dear Sir, I wish to apply for the position advertised in the Business World. I am a Chinese woman, twenty-five years old. After I left high school I took a three-year business course in one of the best commercial schools in Shanghai, majoring in auditing. Since graduated from business school I have worked for a lawyer's office for 2 years. Last year, I got my Master's degree in Britain. Now I am looking for a more challenging job with a bright future. And I think this position offers me a very good opportunity. I am looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours, Li Ping
