2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文中词汇表达比较丰富，可是单词拼写还需加强；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

If a foreign friend is going to my hometown Shaoxing,I will invite him to donghu lake first.There are a lot of special boates with long history.It is a beautiful place round of moutains .when we on the boat ,we can see some cuty fishes in the clear water .Durning 2000 years ,shaoxing developed with a small country to a mordern city. luxun,yunpei cai ects,many intellectuals born in shaoxing。I think you must have red lunxun's novels. But what's the most interesting places in shaoxing ? everybody in shaoxing will have different answer. In my memory,shengyuan is the most impressed place I have been to visit.It is famous of a legend strory and a poem. A couple lived there many years ago, the host 's wife died for a reson. The host felt very sad and wrote a beautiful peom to miss her . you can see the poem write on the stone wall until now. Try to walk on the path with friends.