小学三年级英语作文:My school

文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富；能够运用简单的从句，但不熟练；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强。

this viewpoint excites many people,but it also arouse some concerns about its hidden hazards to the Olympics.so it also makes sence to worry about the potential risks that if the olympics helding the same country may bring to human race.This essay will argue that the Olympics should not have a permanent home for 3 reasons: ………., …………. and ………….