小学三年级英语作文:My school

缺少组织，上下文衔接欠流畅；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；采用了一些简单的从句。

This viewpoint excites many people,but it also arouses some concerns about its hidden hazards to the Olympics.So it also makes sence to worry about the potential risks that if the Olympics helding the same country may bring to human race.This essay aims to discuss the Olympics should not have a permanent home for 3 reasons: ………., …………. and ………….