小学三年级英语作文:My school

作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富；文中词汇表达灵活性要提高，希望能较熟练地使用高级词汇。

This viewpoint excites many people,but it also arouses some concerns about its hidden hazards to the Olympics.So it also makes sense to worry about the potential risks that if the Olympics helding the same country may bring to human race.This essay aims to discuss the Olympics should not have a permanent home for three reasons: economic, the function of hosting the Olympics and environment.