高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My name is Amy.My hometwon is very beautiful.In the past,they were many tree around my hometown.River had so many fish,they piayed each other.Also we lived ugly house,but we had a warm home and warm hometown.We are happy and low. From now on,we have very high buildings and all kinds of stores.I think all these can't bring beautiful environment.look our home.So many cars drive in highway.And they bring bad thing to us.We need save our hometown.