高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，高级词汇使用稍显不足；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

My name is Amy.My hometown is very beautiful.In the past,they were many trees around my hometown.Rivers had so many fish,they piayed each other.Also we lived ugly house,but we had a warm home and warm hometown.We are happy and low. From now on,we have very high buildings and all kinds of stores.I think all these can't bring beautiful environment.look our home.So many cars drive in highways.And they bring bad thing to us.We need save our hometown.