2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:关于微笑

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Chinese style of crossing streets has been a hot topic on the internet recently.Now many people go across the streets without looking at the traffic lights.It has brought some terrible things to themselves as well as to other people.I think there are two main reasons.Some of them lack awareness of traffic safety.Besides,others maybe so busy that they do not want to wait for the green light. However,These behaviors must be corrected right away.Most important of all,everyone should obey the traffic rules.In my opinion,it is necessary to pay attention to the traffic lights when you are going to cross the street,never go across when the traffic light is red.And you are supposed to walk on the zebra road.No jaywalking.No hurry.Try to be responsible to yourself whenever you are.As a student,I'll try my best to advise people to obey the traffic rules.