高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

My name is Amy.My hometown is very beautiful.In the past,they were many trees around my hometown.Rivers had so many fish,they played each other.Also we lived ugly house,but we had a warm home and warm hometown.We are happy and low. From now on,we have very high buildings and all kinds of stores.I think all these can't bring beautiful environment.look! Our home is dangerous.So many cars drive in highways.And they bring bad thing to us.We need save our hometown.