2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦144:Good Ways to Keep Healthy

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Good Ways to Keep Healthy Health is very important for us.We have many ways to keep healthy.Let me give you some advice. We have three good ways to keep healthy.At first,we should pay attention on diet.We should eat healthily.We should eat more fruit and vegetables and eat less meat.Secondly,we should do more exercise.Such as taking a walk,play ball games and so on.Thirdly, we should be happy all the time.We can make friends or smile.It's good for our healthy. Let's take action to keep healthy.