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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46199
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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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From the picture,we can see that those who has higher degree can earn more and the unemployment rates of them are lower.Thus I can safely draw a conclusion that the more knowledge we gain,the higher income we can get. The reasons of the picture are as follows: First of all,Those who has high degree uaually has adequate knowledge and skills,which enables them to enjoy higher income.In addition,most companies tend to recruit learned job hunters.Furthermore,those who has higher degrees can closely grab every possibile chance.Thus,they can earn more and avoid losing their job. This survey no doubt emphasize the importance of education.So we'd better learn more and improve our skills .Only in this way can we gain more chances in the fierce job market.

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