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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦125:低碳

发布时间:2015-03-31 17:59浏览次数:502
要求:
节约资源, 保护环境.,从我们身边的小事做起。假设你是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生, 请以“My Low-carbon Life” 为题写一篇英文演讲稿,简单谈谈“低碳生活”的重要性,以及你所倡导的“低碳生活”方式,例如:
 (1)每天步行上学;
(2)离开教室时,关灯、风扇、电脑等;
(3)不用水时, 记住关水龙头,循环使用水;
(4)不使用塑料袋。

注意:

1. 词数80左右 (文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数)

2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
It’s our duty to protect the environment.
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Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

It’s our duty to protect the environment. As we all know, with the global warming and energy consumption, the environment is becoming worse and worse. It is very important for us to start with a low-carbon lifestyle. But how can we live a low carbon life? Here are my ideas. Firstly, it is a very good idea for us to go to school on foot instead of by car. It is good for the environment and our health as well. Secondly, remember to turn off the lights, fans and computers when we leave the classrooms. Thirdly, it is important for us to turn off the tap when we finish using the water. We can reuse water, too. For example, we can reuse the water to water the flowers or trees. At last, try to use the cloth shopping bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. (In addition, it is important for us to use fewer fast food boxes or chopsticks so that we can reduce the white pollution.) I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things. Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.

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