2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my foreign friend want to visit to my hometown ,i will take him to visit xiamen city of china ,you ask possibly to me that why you take him to xiamen;OK ,NOW I give you my answer,first,XIA men is a very beantiful city,called"ten civil city ",it have a good ennivroment,and abside of sea.