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It is my pressure to introduce my good friend to you .She is a pretty gril with long hair,a pari of big eyes.Her name is Marry.I like staying with her because i can tell my secrets to her even thought sometime those are not the good news.She is always patient to me .I think knowinng her is my honor ,and I am very proud of her ,thank you ,my dear good friend!