小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it?He is nine.He like sleep very much when he eat after.So,he is very fat.He is kind and cut.But if you put he food,he is very angry.It's looks like afaid!He has big eyes,long ears and long tail.DuDU likes eating beef and chicken.I like DuDu very much.