文章衔接手法恰当;文中从句过少;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多。
My best friend is Helen,I like she very much.We are the same age.She is the most celver student in our class,so she is our classmaster.She is shy and cute.She has big eyes and long stight hair.She is a thin and tall girl.So,many studens and our teachers are all like the beautiful girl.