但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;文章衔接手法恰当;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强。
My best friend is Helen,and I like her very much. We are the same age. She is the most clever student in our class,so she is our moniter. She is shy and cute. She has big eye and long straight hair. She is a thin and tall girl. So,many students and our teachers are all like the beautiful girl.