从句使用不熟练;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;文章上下文衔接自然。
My best friend is Helen,and I like her very much. We are the same age. She is a clever student in our class,so she is our monitor. She is shy and cute. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. She is a thin and tall girl. She likes reading books, playing computer games and chess. So,many students and our teachers are all like the beautiful girl.