但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
My best friend is Helen,and I like her very much. We are the same age. She is a clever student in our class,so she is our monitor. She is shy and cute. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. She is a thin and tall girl. She likes reading books, playing computer games and chess. She often helps us. So,many students and our teachers are all like the beautiful girl.