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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40868
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分50.5分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

There is unwised to get a words quickly when you hear something or see something. Isn't ture she was sad when you saw her was crying? And did you know the fact once you get a look or get a voice? The lady who was crying maybe she was shocked or very happy, and you cannot judge something quickly when you just met it. It's unfair to other if you make some different impression to for a person. Like the real worlds, if you see someone go after from you, will you think the guy will do some bad for you? Certainly, you cann't make a judgement quickly. Make a decision quickly doesn't mean this is not good, but its really unwised.

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