小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. She is a girl. she is very nice. We are going to learn sweeming next week. She work very hard.She has long hare.She like wear high hill.She used to get up early to sweeming every morning.Some times,she give me a lot of good advice in work.