2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(16):中国十大新闻人物徐本禹

作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用高级词汇；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；复杂句的使用不是很丰富。

xu ben yu is a boy , a postgraduate of the agricultural university . he was born in Shandong of Liaocheng in 1982 . He went to Dafang poverty-stricken areas in guizhou to supported education obligatory in July 2003 。Under his influence, it was taken up by five of his classmates and many other university students . rencently,sevral school have a great improvement in Dafang poverty-stricken areas in guizhou , here's Education condition had the very big change 。