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Xu ben yu is a boy, a postgraduate of the agricultural university. He was born in Shandong of Liaocheng in 1982. He went to Dafang poverty-stricken areas in guizhou to supported education obligatory in July 2003. Under his influence, it was taken up by five of his classmates and many other university students. rencently,sevral school has a great improvement in Dafang poverty-stricken areas in guizhou, here's Education condition had the very big change.