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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦144:Good Ways to Keep Healthy

发布时间:2015-05-29 14:08浏览次数:780
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健康对我们来说非常重要, 我们有很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示,以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题,写一篇80个词左右的短文,倡议“健康生活”,从三个方面说明如何保持健康。

短文首句已给出,不记入总词数, 可适当发挥。


1fooda balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less meat…
2exercisedo more exercise, take a walk, play ball games…
3happiness keep happy, make friends, smile…
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正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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Good Ways to Keep Healthy Health is important for us.But do you know the way to keep our health? First,you need a balanced diet.For breakfast,you can have an egg,some bread and a glass of milk.This helps you start the day well.You can eat rice or noodles for lunch.You also need to eat some fruit and vegetables.This meal gives us full energy for the whole afternoon.When you are hungry between meals,you can eat an apple or a pear.Vegetables are very good.We need to have less meat for dinner.Don't eat cakes or sweets.They have too much sugar.And they are bad for our teeth. Second,we must keep a good body.So do more exercise.Such as,playing ball games,running,jogging and so on.If you don't like these.You can take a walk after dinner with your parents or friends. Third,keep happy.A good mood is very important for us.When you are alone,you need to make some good friends.If you meet bad things.Don't angry,you should smile.This helps you have a happy day. Those are my suggestions,I hope everyone can be healthy!

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