小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；有效的运用了一些复杂句；请增加词汇量的积累，并仔细检查词汇的拼写。

I has a good friend,her name is xie dan. Xie dan is my classmate in my university. She is a beautifull girl with a pair of big eays,when she talk with somebody her eays likes the crescent moon. she is intested in singing and dancening,when she was young her teacher found out she has a great talent in singing and dancening, and suggested she develop in singing and dacening. In the study,she gave a lot of assist to me，if i has any problem,she is alway the first person answer for me. I am very thank to make friends with her.