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有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。
Deal with Money Carefully For me,I think it is wise for students to deal with their money carefully in daily life.First,as we all know ,the tuition fee is very high for some ordinary Chinese families.Some parents have to work hard to earn money so that their children can go to university. Moreover,most of students rely on their parents for daily life and some of them don't have much time and ability to earn money so they should do their best to save money such as looking for group-buy while eating or traveling.Second,if students learn how to deal with money carefully,they can save quite a lot of money to do other things like traveling and doing business .Nowadays,students have many ways to save money.For example, Internet is very popular among people especially young people.We can buy many daily items on internet which may cost us less compared with buying from stores.As a result,I think it's a must for students to deal with money carefully.