小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；能够简单运用一些从句；作者词汇量偏小，且文章中拼写错误较多。

I have a good friend, and her name is xie dan. Xie dan is my classmate in my university. She is a beautifull girl with a pair of big eays,when she talks with somebody her eays likes the crescent moon. she is intrested in singing and dancening.When she was young her teacher found out she has a great talent in singing and dancening, and suggested she develop in singing and dancening. In the study,she gave me a lot of help，if i have any problem,she is alway the first help me. I am glad to make friends with her.