小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend, and her name is xie dan. Xie dan is my classmate in my university. She is a beautifull girl with a pair of big eays,when she talks with somebody her eays likes the crescent moon. she is interested in singing and dancing.When she was young her teacher found out she has a great talent in singing and dancing, and suggested she develop in singing and dancing. In the study,she gave me a lot of assistance，if i have any problem,she is always the first answer for me. I am glad to make friends with her.