小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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Liuyunbing,my new teacher, was graduated from Sichuan university.He comes from a little village,his village is very poor.here many people prefer working early to studying, Because the education condition is not good.Here only a few people go to school,many people start working in their hoom when they were young.however, Liuyunbing was very hard to study,he aways thought that Learning is the only way out for him.Now he succeeded.