高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometown is very beautiful i uesed lived in hometown ,there have green trees .the riveris very clean,although rooms are very simple,streets are very croweded,but people lived happy ,now you can see bigand tall house ,you also can see expensive cars running at street,when the industrail develop ,the enviroment becaming bad ,the tree becaming lower ,the fish beaming disappear,so i think my hometown is not clean ,we should protect our live place