2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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Dear Mark, I’m glad to know that you'd like to visit my hometown a few days later. It has been a long time since I came from the city you are living in. Those days I spent with your family are real treasures in my memories. And now, it's my turn. The city I living in is named Shanghai. It's one of the most famous cities of China and well known as the pearl of the east. There are a large amount of foreign people working and living here. I am looking forward to yourarrival。 Yours sincerely, Romeo