2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中应增加从句和复合句的使用；文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高，高级词汇的积累上也要再接再厉。

it's not smart that make a decious when you see or hear something But in her rise through the legal profession, she has made a number of personal sacrifices, most notably marriage and children. in part, she has said, because of an excessive work schedule. " I cannot attribute that divorce to work," she told a panel on judicial life. "But certainly the fact that I was leaving my home at 7:00am and getting back at 10:00pm was not of assistance in the problems developing in my marriage." "I have found it difficult to maintain a relationship while I've pursued my career," Ms. Sotomayor also said in a television interview. Ms. Sotomayor was subsequently engaged, but that 8-year relationship ended, too before they went to the altar. She has no children.