作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加从句和长句的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
There is an old saying:"seeing is believing ".That is,we usually trust what we see and hear.As a result,many people make conclusions immediately based on what they see and hear.In my opinion,it is unwise for people to make conclusions at once while seeing and hearing.After we hear or see something,we have to think twice before make conclusions.Otherwise,we may make many mistakes.For example,many salesmen judge customers by their clothes which may make them lose business. In society,many people like speaking ill things about others.So if you judge a person by listening these words,you make lose a chance to make friends.I think we should calm down and think clearly after we see or hear something and then make conclusions.Thus our life and career can go smoothly.
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