2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:关于微笑

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It was fine.I went for an outing with my classmates today. In the morning,We got together in front of school gate at half past eight.When everyone was here,we started to go to the People's Park by bike.It cost about twenty minutes' ride. In the Park,we had great fun playing game together until about 12 o'clock.We were all tired and hungry,so we took out food from our bags,then we had a picnic. In the afternoon,we went around the park.There were many beautiful places.We couldn't help taking photos.Besides,we visited the zoo in the park.There were various kinds of animals.Such as monkey,elephant,tiger,deer and so on... At last,we left the park at 5 o'clock.It was an unforgettable experience.